By following the milestone of last week, we did most improvement of our outcome and this week for the final pitching we just have to put them together then present to the clients. Also, we have to show them the physical is we are doing the print base.
Overall the presentation goes well but I felt I can do much better if I can do it again because every time when I am panic I just forgot all the thing I need to say and my mind goes blank. Although most of the time I got some notes with me, I never look at them that is the reason why there are lots of things I forgot to say. However, every presentation also is a practice for me so I am sure that I can do better next time. And for the feedback, the client really likes it, we also got some feedback from other mentors, most of them think the whole campaign is attractive enough, but one thing we can do better is to avoid the white text on a yellow background. That’s happening in our animation and no one really notices that’s a problem, we didn’t think really carefully about the people who do not have a good sight.
Although we final our presentation, as a group we will still work on the campaign to expand the project and make it strong and put it into our portfolio which I think will be a really strong piece. For me, I am going to explore more different ways of the physical stuff something like stickers for the services who have joined us or other physical product which I still need to explore with.
Although I have done of my leaflet box, I still think I can expand my idea into other different formats so I did more research on the folding leaflet.
Those research I did I really like it, their folding method are really special and attractive, I think if people receive one of them, people would like to keep it. However, not all of them are easy to keep and not all are fit to my idea of a long-term use, so I just chose two to work on. One of them I chose is the triangle decoration which I think can be a leaflet tabletop. I thought if I make it, it is not only just send to our target, it can also be sent to the other shop or business to let more people see it and hope to more services to join us.
By the structure of it, there are only three sides will be used I have to think really carefully about what information I should put in. The next step is to make this consistent compared to the leaflet box. Therefore, I decided to use the same colour in each category but in a simple way. Because the shape is a triangle so it is not easy to make it look nice so that I make it as simple as it can and if I make it the layout are too complicated then the whole thing will look too busy and too much.
To being clear and simple I design those three finally.
I did also design for the two extra which are the bottom of the triangle, so when people pick it up or when people hang it out, there is something to look at and not plain. The final outcome looks like:
Another idea I have expanded with is a twist fold which is normally used for Promotion, Special Events, Invitations, Specialty/Novelty Projects and Multi-PIece Marketing Package. The benefit of this fold is the size of the whole thing can be decreased and become a small square which is beneficial for people to keep and when people unfolded it, it becomes a massive poster.
Example of the fold
That’s how it looks when it is unfolded
After a discussion with my group mates, and I was suggested not to make the front like this, but the rest of the layout is fine so I work on it with the theme.
For this folding poster, I didn’t do it on three individual things because the size of this is bigger so it can be included more details. Also of those corners, I use our theme and divided into four parts. People can remember our campaign when they first got this.
The final edit with all the details, contents and make the shape being perfect and the final outcome is made at the end.
M3- The casual presentation of our brief
For this presentation, we are given feedback by the client and see if there anything can improve before the formal presentation. Overall, they really like the campaign, and for my outcome, they think it is quite special and it is a good idea for people to keep and the only thing they concern is about the white text. However, after we talk to our tutor and we told that we don’t have to worry about it because our target is services but not the resident so there are not much we have to worried with.
Before I got the colour tone of our campaign, I start doing the draft of the leaflet box. First, I make a decision of which pen pot I am going to go for, by deciding on the form, there are few conditions I have to think really careful so I imagine myself as the service and feel of what they will concern with. To be a business or services people they don’t always have much time to read, so the content I am going to put in the leaflet must be clear but all the main concept have to be included. Also as a business people, if they don’t have much time to read the information which means they won’t spend too much time to folding a stuff. Therefore, for my leaflet box, I have to choose one which is simple for them to it to a box also not too complex for me to work with the layout and finally I chose the origami folding.
That’s the practise piece for the box, in order to find out the right size for the services for using it, I have tried in different size of paper finally, I found the perfect size of it. 22.5cm*22.5cm square paper and after the paper is fold, the box become a great size for holding pens. As you see on the above, I have started drafting the layout of the box, but I haven’t decided it yet because we still do not have the illustration so I am not sure how many objects I have to in but overall, I got a sense of idea how will it looks like.
My idea is the services will receive the leaflet by post and they do not have to fold the box by themselves because they will get the leaflet which has already folded which mean they just have to open it to become a box and that’s all that they have to do. On the below is the example that they will get.
After I got the right size, then I drew the outline on the paper with all the folding guild and scan it because I cannot find any template of it so I have to make one by myself. By working digitally, I follow my scan and the size I have marked then drew the outline of it.
On the other hand, we finally have our own brand theme and some of the illustration that means I can actually start working on it
For our illustrations, we decided not to put any colour because as the example of the above you can see the background are quite colourful so in order to clear the illustration we want them just being black and outlined.
Some of the characters
Some of the objects
There are four sides of my leaflet box so I have to design 4 different pages which included our campaign name, the information of us, the benefit of them and some of the illustrations. And I made two sides are with information and two sides are about our style and theme. Overall, I didn’t follow my draft exactly but still similar, I just lay them out more clearly.
On the top of the first page is about our information and out target which mainly tell the services our aim and the reason for us to do this campaign. At the bottom is one of the categories of our targets and at the beginning, we divided our target into three groups so as to clear the group I am going to make three leaflets for those group. The second page is our title OVER THE HILL and our secondary line.
The third page is talking the benefits of both services and residents, telling them that you can expand their business by helping the resident also they can give a good impact on their community. At the bottom, there are some informant about of our campaign, our website and Facebook page and we also got an app so people can access in a different way which they prefer. The final page is just showing our style and the characters.
As I said we got three group of target audience so I made three sets of different colours, pattern and illustration but the contents are mostly the same. The second page and the third I didn’t change anything because they represent our campaign and the benefit must be the same.
For working as a digital, due to make a clear folding guild line of it, I divided into different parts then it wouldn’t be too confusing when people who want to unfold the paper out like this:
I did also print them out as a physical thing because something it is better to print out and see if there any problem or not. And that’s one of my final outcomes.
After our plan is changed, next we have to discuss again which way should we go and what output we should go for. Actually, this is not a massive of the outcome because everyone should have their own work at the end. At the beginning, there are two people want to do animation but because we are working on a campaign so it is not necessary to have two, and now the one how really want to make animation can do now. About the campaign, there are lots of things we have to decide if not then we cannot work with different format. For this, I also did some research, our concept is to celebrate, and telling people who getting old does not mean the end of their life. On the contrary, it is a new start for them to enjoy their life so the theme that we choose should be colourful and joyful which make people feel happy. Also for the illustration, we want to keep it as a simple and in a cartoon style because we don’t want to make it too serious, we want it to look fun and playful.
There is the colour style that I search which I thought is fit to our concept:
All the colour I found is quite colourful and most of them are bright and sharp, we don’t want to work as normal we want to think it differently to attract people. On the below, there is the research about the style of illustration. In our campaign, we think we should create some characters represent the resident to show the message to the services.
And after a long discussion with other members, we decided to the Memphis style which is designed by 1980. And we thought that style is really celebrating and attractive.
Finally, we determine to use this style and next is to confirm who do what. One is going to this style to create our own brand like the title and the colour theme, she also wants to work with the animation as well, another member wants to do the illustration so she will create all the objects and characters which we need for our outcome. I did not change my idea so I am still doing the physical stuff, the long-term use leaflet. The last member wants to create an app for both residents and services to use. All of our outcomes have to link to each other so all of us have to keep to communicate to each other. Next, it to wait for the colour tone, then we can actually start working on it, and me before I got the theme I got some time so I did some layout design of my box, I did also decide to which box I should go for. At the same time, I got some new idea with my reusable leaflet which means I can create another use of it except the pen holder.
After I got the idea of the pen holder/pot origami, next step is to think about what shape and form I want it to be, although the idea of pen holder still looks the same, the folding method and the way of put information is different. Therefore, I start doing draft, sketches and fold it physically. First, I follow the instruction of the tutorial by paper folds on YouTube and made some different pen pots. By choosing those shape, I have considered some condition of fitting our challenge and themes. Our main audience is to the services so the things we design must be attractive and hope can catch their eye when they first see our thing. And after they read our campaign then they can be interested in it then join this campaign to go into the Hub and help the resident have why they need.
I named the pen holder which I going to make a leaflet box, I didn’t do the holder just in a regular shape because I want to try as many possibilities as I can and find out the best of our audience to read.
After I done the folding and the next step is to think about the layout of the text, by following this point, I also have to consider of which are not too complicated for me to do it digitally because I cannot just make a normal leaflet and let the services fold it be a box, the information will not be seen as the example on the below:
As you can see this way it does not work because after the paper is folded all the information will be transformed to in different order and people cannot read it properly. That’s not the idea I expect, my idea is to let people keep my design and let more people read and access to this event.
Something happens in the way of us working in the campaign, there is one of the member concern about she cannot finish her work on time so she decided to leave the group and work on her own as an individual project. And because of her decision, we have to change some of our idea and theme, because at the beginning we discuss the idea and concept together and after she decided to leave the group she still using the same concept. For us, in order to avoid our work look like hers, we need do the research of the style again. And that is a really good experience for our group to be honest, I have learnt that there is not all the thing are always be what we expect so we should have another plan to get ready if there’s any accident.
The lecture we have today is about different content to change the experience
Exercise: Role Play (It should be at the beginning of the project also have to be at the end)
Create a community: who we are communicating with.
Our first step to do is to create a persona: Name: Age: Profession: Bio:(Can draw)
Powers: how much influence they have
Motivation: Communication and
Experience Home to Hub(Think of a journey) This is about how are we thinking of the project, (The process in the portfolio-the customer journey-information design)
After we pick one of the people persona, next we have to start thinking about the journey of their daily life.
The reason for doing this exercise is to let us have a thinking process, how we work with our client and consider about our target audiences, how can they access with this project which really helps us when we are designing. We want our audience get our message so it is how to guide us to go into the right way.
Our persona is Josie, 36 years old, a mother of 3 children and her profession is Dentist. Through those bullet points we create a journey map of her daily life and how can she get the information of our project. So her story is: She woke up at 6 every morning after that get kids ready for school then drives them to school, next she will park her car near the school then take a train to work and on the way of the journey she has food and look at her technology devices to get information. When she starts working she will have the conversation with her patients or colleagues where she got information with. After finish work, she gets the train back to where she parked her car, and on the way, she might look at the poster or banner. after picked the kids back then go home and cook. Before she goes to bed, she normally watches tv until 11 she goes to bed.
In her journey map, there are lots of opportunities for her to get information which she can access with it. Especially, our target is about services it is good for us to consider about how can they get the information because not all the business or services people will have much time to look at different websites or Facebook to get news so that’s a question for our group to think about.
After the logo and theme are decide the next step is to design our creative cv and portfolio(both online and pdf). Use the theme that I have designed then apply it to all the items. For my whole brand, I have only used one pink but only in different tint and opacity to make it looks different.
I got my normal cv but it looks really normally so I need to use that information to create another creative CV to show people that we are a graphic people by using our skills. The main colour I used is still kept on the one I used for the logo, and the only thing I have to pay attention is not to put too much because it will be distracted people eyes so I need to figure out what is the most important part for people to look at. I summarise my formal cv into 6 parts: Introduce myself, contact, education, work experience, interest and skills. My idea is to use some colour to point out the main thing I want to show.
Like the title, I used a lighter pink for the outline which is the same as the work experience, I have also used the pink colour for the text to show some special words.
In the contact part, it included all the social media which is linked to my online portfolio, works, blog and information.